Its a lovely macro, and good colors. Evie, i must say u have a great eye for beautiful things around you. :-) I would suggest you to use a tripod on such shots, it would eliminate the slight blur also. Or may be you can try higher shutter speeds. :-)
Evie, I think you brought in the slight blur on purpose and I find it functional. Sometimes it's better just to indicate, not showing every tiny detail, such as here. It gives a watercolour- or pastel effect which the subject asks for. I want it on my wall.